Saturday, January 10, 2009

INDIA






i am in love with this country i call home
i am a patriot completely
i don't care about the poverty i see
because it is the spirit i carry in me
i love her for the noises
the sights and the food profound
and also for a billion who call her home ground
she is strong and hard on the outside u will see
but is soft when it comes to her family
she has a tendency of making you smile
it can be with the movies or people so fine
lived here for 18 got 60 more to go
but i wanna take each day a little slow
i wanna travel and see her through
i wanna go from leh to daman and diu
each time we hear a politician take over
the only worry is how much more they will rape her
rape her off her pride ,her glory ,her joy
rape her off her land with which they built their first toy
in every one of us .. is a fire burning bright
it still lingers even after allll the fright
i am sure if you scratch the suface
u will see a love not withered without a trace
it might be small like a little pebble or stone
but i am in love with this country i call home

16 comments:

Jonathan said...

hmm ... Sweet post!
...
I am proud of my country too ...
U mite say tat im in another country n sayin ... but I know tat my country is better than all the places ive been too ...

now u visit entire country instead of dubai .. :p ...
lol ...

love the lines ...
"in every one of us .. is a fire burning bright
it still lingers even after allll the fright
i am sure if you scratch the suface
u will see a love not withered without a trace
it might be small like a little pebble or stone
but i am in love with this country i call home"

:)

shuuuu said...

hehehehehehe .... hmmm i will come ree ... andd u also come no if u love this place so much :P.... heheheheheehheeheheh ... thankss jon .. muaah

D!! said...

love it!!..love it!!..love it!!...love the post n love India...love evryhting bout it..love how u write!!..its like u think poetry!!...

Jonathan said...

wat to do? ...
pinde ka ye jo padai hai na,
bahut galat jaga pe dum hai ...

ab thoda time hothe ich, bagh ke aajatu ...

:)
mua

Jonathan said...

very tru what your mom said ...
'its like u think poetry' ..

shuuuu said...

to mittuuuu .. thanksssssssss :)..... i lovee howw u write re :).. muaahhhhhhh yaay we share a love INDIA ... :)

shuuuu said...

to jon D isntt my mother thats mitttuu hahahaahahahahah stupiidddd boyyy :P.... div is my motherr ... anywayyyyy heheh u come back fastlyyyyy :).... anddd thankss jonn :)

Jonathan said...

oh shit ...
i was confused ...
but anyways ... :)

nids!!! said...

the flow... the thought... the words! its amazing! i love it! :) i wanna see every part of her too! :) shes gorgeous! :D
keep writing babe! you just keep outdoing urself! :) ummaaah!

D!! said...

hello..daughter!!..yay i have a daughter!!..n a poet too...i didnt think i would get this lucky!! :D

shuuuu said...

to nidsss thankkss babee ... muaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhh we will see atleastt some placess togetherrr :)hopefulllyyy .... muaaahhhhhh

shuuuu said...

yaayyy i have a mommyy whoo loookss youngerr than mee and whoo writes coooks and laughss brilliantlyy awwww yaaaaaaaaaayyyyy

Parth Jhala said...

heyy aishu...mast poem!! i love the range uve covered! with fine flow! guess we all love india...for what it is and for what it isnt!! keep goin!

shuuuu said...

parthh thankssssss :)... i am gladdd u likedd it ..... :)... muah

jadedsouza said...

Girl! you know you are the best. and what you have written is just a trailor... You have more to write and conquer.... so write write... till you stop

shuuuu said...

maaaaaaaaaaaammmm thankuuuuuuu sooooo mucch:)..... oh my godd u commentedd :).. yes yes i will writee heheheheh thankss maamm :)