Friday, February 20, 2009

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As she walked away wondering if she should turn and look back,
at all those times she had fallen , gotten up and dusted herself off
when triumph , madness and joy bloomed
and love wounds were bandaged back by friends
new loves formed and battered later
where the silhouette of her life was far from her
and the only thing she felt was a tear
a tear you couldn't question
a tear that knew her through and through
a tear of faith
as she stood trembling in her mind and her body still
she thought of the days to come
hoping for whiffs of coffee that would linger
and craving for laughter and warmth
till then she would just be a bubble in this big sea of life
she knew she had chosen right
and she walked smiling into the horizon
still having faith , in the unknown

7 comments:

Jonathan said...

beautifully written ....
and i think i know the meaning of this one ...
anyway, keep writin more often
God bless!

shuuuu said...

jon how do u always know meaningss :P... heheheheheheheh hmmmmmm whatever the meaning is let me knowww :).. and yeaaaah will writee if i can think :P.. and i can never think except for bouts like this :p

Jonathan said...

well .. I always do happen to know the meaning of what you write ... :) ... thats a gift i have ...
and trust me .. you can write many more things ...
u jus need to take some time for that...

shuuuu said...

okkkkkkkkkkkkkk :P.... modesty ani ok thing eh leduu neeekuu :P... po reeeee .. heheheheh hmmm even i dunno what i write sometimes :P.....

D!! said...

i just want to say "love will keep us alive"..n friendships will bring us out of coma!!..hehe!!..wonderfully written

shuuuu said...

heheheheheh gosshh D :).... hheheheh very well said :)........ muah

Parth Jhala said...

really well written! its got a great flow to it! and an almost intense energy! keep writin!