I see a smile light up a face
I see laughter always leaving a trace
I see joy searching for its base
I see i see
I see a tear glisten in a loved ones eye
I see a girl speak even though she is shy
I see friends walking by
I see I see
I see love in all its forms
I see people breaking norms
I see temper as it turns into a storm
I see I see
I see bliss all around
I see rather hear a weird sound
I see flames and people fall to the ground
I see I see
I see terror and fright
I see my nations plight
I see everything but right
I see I see
I see i have woken up to a new day
I see i will have to live this way
I see we can never be HAPPY and GAY
I see I see
I see life in all its show
I see it crumble blow by blow
I see it fall really low
I see I see
As i go blind by all the scare
I see what my kids have to bear
I see we haven't left them a share
I see I see
I still see how we have become
I see a Funeral with trumpets and a drum
I see a mother not accept a huge sum
I see I see
I see it all, all the time
I see we live in dirt and grime
I see and think it is TIME
I see i see
I have stopped looking and moved away
I have stopped seeing if its night or day
I have stopped hearing what people have to say
and i have sworn to myself
Its time I did something for me, for them,for everyone .
I don't see anymore... I DO....
17 comments:
awesome!!
its amazing!! in every sense of the word! love the flow! i cant say how brilliant it is!
beautiful poem ... u wrote really well ... got a good flow to it ...
to D..... thanksssss :).... muaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh
to nids thank u .... :):)... glad u liked it
to jon thanks a lot ..
Love the string of rhythm.
Good Job !
JAAGO PPL JAAGO !!!
thanks sana :).... yes yes time we woke up and smelt so much more than just the beanss ....
awesome s the word!!...
thanksss DOLLLLL :):)... muaahhh
I see...
i see a side to you that makes me proud..
and wish i said it more often aloud..
... excellent... well written!..
with much aplomb..
you are growing up baby..
love..mom
awww sniff sniff i am toucheddd .. :)... vashishthar vaaayar brahmarishi :):).... heheheh thankss mommmyy :):)...
byootiful my dear husband!! i like the flow!! :):):)
thaankuuu wifeeeyyy :):)... muaahhh
great flow of thoughts!!
awwww.... thankss parth :)....... thanku yaayyyyy u comnmenteddddd
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